The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Internet
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The internet
contains
knowledge
in abundance. All over the world, necessary information is available to people through smartphones and computers with the help of
internet
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the internet
and it is free. With the help of
internet people
Suggestion
the internet people
can have it access from anywhere and it is a pass time activity
too but
Accept comma addition
too, but
there are
also
some drawbacks to be taken into account. On the one hand, there are
number
Suggestion
a number
of advantages.
Firstly
, people have access to their
knowledge
database with just a click from anywhere in the world. It certainly helps them to work from home and endorse
this
culture.
Secondly
, people can have it as their leisure activity to gain
knowledge
from their personal computers or
smartphones
Suggestion
smart phones
.
For example
, one can learn about geography and increase
knowledge
by sitting at home.
Thirdly
, as the
knowledge
available is free, it can help from kids to adults. It will result in kids learning from a different yet better perspective which will lead to better grades.
On the other hand
, one problem with
internet
Suggestion
an internet
based learning is that not all of the
knowledge
available is legit. Take sightings of Unidentified Flying Object (UFO),
for instance
. Another possible issue is that it lacks human interaction which leads
to people lose
Suggestion
people to lose
contact with each other and
more involvement
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more involved
with technology.
Although
it is free to gain
knowledge
from
internet
Suggestion
the internet
, it can be harmful to some extent. In conclusion, while there are some benefits of having free
knowledge
from
internet
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the internet
, it can
also
result in people gaining fake
knowledge
and indulging themselves more with technology.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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