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The plans below show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The diagrams illustrate some changes in Ashford between 2010 and now. It is clear that the principal change of Ashford is a construction of a bridge over
River
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 Tam. Various developments with regard to housing, yacht marina and increasing forest land in size. Looking at the maps, we can see a main
road
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 runs through Ashford from east to west. In 2010, people had to take a ferry to cross the
river
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.
However
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, the
second
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 map shows that a bridge was built and provided the way to cross the
river
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instead
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 of taking a ferry. Yacht marinas were constructed along the south
side
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 of the
river
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, and a branch
road
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 appeared to provide the connection between yacht marinas and the main
road
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. In 2010, 5 buildings spread to the northeast
side
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 of the
river
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. Now, 2 more buildings can be seen over there, and a row of apartments
were erected
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was erected
 along the
river
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side
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.
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, the forest
was expanded
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expanded
 in size from the northwest
side
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 to the southwest
side
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 of the
river
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, which is the opposite
side
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 of the main
road
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.
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