The plans below show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams illustrate some changes in Ashford between 2010 and now. It is clear that the principal change of Ashford is a construction of a bridge over
River
Tam. Various developments with regard to housing, yacht marina and increasing forest land in size. Looking at the maps, we can see a main
road
runs through Ashford from east to west. In 2010, people had to take a ferry to cross the
river
.
However
, the
second
map shows that a bridge was built and provided the way to cross the
river
instead
of taking a ferry. Yacht marinas were constructed along the south
side
of the
river
, and a branch
road
appeared to provide the connection between yacht marinas and the main
road
. In 2010, 5 buildings spread to the northeast
side
of the
river
. Now, 2 more buildings can be seen over there, and a row of apartments
were erected
Suggestion
was erected
along the
river
side
.
Moreover
, the forest
was expanded
Suggestion
expanded
in size from the northwest
side
to the southwest
side
of the
river
, which is the opposite
side
of the main
road
.
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