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the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.

the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.
#information #groth #population #part #world #prediction
Graph -: 7 The bar chart compares the increasing urban
population
 in the different continents (
Africa
,
Asia
,
Latin
America
, and the
Caribbean
) and the whole
world
 in 1950,2000 and
further
 anticipation for 2030.The unit is measured in percentage. Determining the detail of 1950
maximum
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 number of
people
was
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urbanized in
Latin
America
 and the
Caribbean
 was around 40%.
in contrast
,
Asia
 and
Africa
 had the same percentage (more than 10%) of living in cities.
moreover
, exactly 30% public
were
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 residing all over the earth. In 2000,
Africa
 and
Asia
 almost doubled an increase in urban
population
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populations
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 than 1950 which was equal to approximately 38%.
Latin
America
 and the
Caribbean
 stood at 70% city
population
. Whilst, around
a
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half number of
population
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the population
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 urbanized in the whole
world
. It is predicted that by 2030 most of the
population
 (80%) of
people
 will live in cities in
Latin
America
 and the
Caribbean
.
however
, 60%
people
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of people
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 in the whole
world
 are expected which will ass near
as
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Africa
 and
an
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Asia
 city
population
 of these continents will be 51% and 57% respectively.
Overall
, it is seen that the urban
population
 has grown on all continents
therefore
 it is expected that more than half of
people
 will be residing in cities in the whole
world
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, africa, asia, latin, america, caribbean, world, people with synonyms.
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