the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.
Graph -: 7
The bar chart compares the increasing urban
population
in the different continents (Africa
, Asia
, Latin
America
, and the Caribbean
) and the whole world
in 1950,2000 and further
anticipation for 2030.The unit is measured in percentage.
Determining the detail of 1950 maximum
number of Correct article usage
the maximum
people
was
urbanized in Unnecessary verb
apply
Latin
America
and the Caribbean
was around 40%.in contrast
, Asia
and Africa
had the same percentage (more than 10%) of living in cities. moreover
, exactly 30% public were
residing all over the earth.
In 2000, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Africa
and Asia
almost doubled an increase in urban population
than 1950 which was equal to approximately 38%.Fix the agreement mistake
populations
Latin
America
and the Caribbean
stood at 70% city population
. Whilst, around a
half number of Correct article usage
apply
population
urbanized in the whole Correct article usage
the population
world
.
It is predicted that by 2030 most of the population
(80%) of people
will live in cities in Latin
America
and the Caribbean
.however
, 60% people
in the whole Change preposition
of people
world
are expected which will ass near as
Change preposition
apply
Africa
and an
Correct article usage
apply
Asia
city population
of these continents will be 51% and 57% respectively.
Overall
, it is seen that the urban population
has grown on all continents therefore
it is expected that more than half of people
will be residing in cities in the whole world
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