The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. 

Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
The figure provided reveals the data about the
number
of students in Australia coming from 4 countries
such
as Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia and
Singapore
between the years 1982 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen from the provided graph that the total
number
of residences rose over the given period with slight ups and downs apart from
Singapore
's residences. One of the first things to note is that during the range of years between 1982 and 1994 Malaysia contains the most students residing in Australia, which
leveled
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out at 7500 students,
while
Hong Kong, Indonesia and
Singapore
experienced an upward trend. From that time there was a dramatic growth in the
number
of Hong Kong and Indonesia during the
next
4years
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4 years
from 1000 to 1900 and 2600 relatively, before dropping down to 1400 and 2200 appropriately. With regards
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Malasia
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Malaysia
there was an increase in the
number
of residences and reached a peak in 1998 showing 1900, and
then
this
number
slumped to 1700 in 2000. As for
the
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Singapore
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,Singapore
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the
number
of
this
country increased over the given period and reached a peak in 2000 by showing 1900
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