Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is irrefutable to say that we
can'tt
can not
can't
cant
cannot
stop the
situation whethere
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situation, whether
situation whether
situation weather
it is good or bad, but we musk try to recover the
situation
to try our best. Many people think that we should accept a worst
situation
such
as poorness, unsatisfied jobs and a shortage of money. While other people arguing that it is important to improve
situation
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the situation
as much as we can. I personally believe with the
laterer
view that we must at least try to improve
situation
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the situation
rather accept it.
To begin
with,
Ther
in or at that place
there
are numerous people who give up very
easily even
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easily, even
in
small bad
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small bad situations
a small bad situation
situation
. They can'
t
handle situations properly and they accept it that there are no changes have been
occurred
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occurring
in there's
situation
and
lastly they
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lastly, they
accept
situation
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the situation
a situation
situations
and lives in
bad
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a bad situation
bad situations
situation
. There are multiple examples of these situations
such
as scarcity of money due to poverty, unsatisfied with their
job
, and so on. Many people
are lives in under
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are living under
are living in under
are lives in below
are lives in below below
poverty line and they can'
t
even do for their bad
situation
. Sometimes they face a plethora of problems
such
as they can'
t
completig
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complete
completed
their study, they can'
t
eat delicious food like us, and many more. Another
noticable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
bad
situation
is that some people are not satisfied with their
job
because there are
number
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a number
of
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
in our society who are doing
job
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the job
for
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of
feeding their family and
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
familys'
a social unit living together
families
family
demand. They can'
t
do enjoy their
job
and at the end they suffer from many
typr
a subdivision of a particular kind of thing
types
of depression and anxiety.
However
, Other people believe that we can'
t
put
situation
as it is. We must fight for it and put out ourselves from the bad
situation
.
For example
,
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
is a diverse country and there many people who live in
bad
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bad situations
a bad situation
situation
before their golden days. Our
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
cricketer
Ms.
Dhoni who
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Dhoni, who
was suffered
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were suffered
were suffering
multiple problems when he was a child and
also
before he became a
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
cricketer
. He
live
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lives
has lived
in under poverty
line but
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line, but
he
decide
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decides
to get rid out of
this
situation
and he started hard work. He liked to
became
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become
a
cricketer
but he didn'
t
like the wicket keeping in cricket. But. Coach said to Dhoni is that there was only one place left and that was wicket keeping so Dhoni pursued
this
particular field and look better days are coming for him and Today he is a
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
and brilliant
cricketer
.
Moreover
, People who don'
t
like to do their
job
and
also
unsatisfied with their
job
, they must try to get out
from
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of
this
situation
rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
putting themselves under pressure. Many People in India and
also
in other countries they are doing multiple jobs in a day. In
this
situation
, there
are
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is
a plethora of problem
solving reasons
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solving, reasoning
solving reasoning
such
as to
spen
pass time in a specific way
spend
spent
quality time with
theur
of them or themselves
their
Thor
family, spend time with their near ones and dear ones. Many people who are doing freelancing to get out
from
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of
their
job
and
also
we have to hustle hard to get out
from
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of
this
kind of
situation
. Many people
are leave
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are leaving
are left
have left
leave
their jobs and starting their own business to complete their dreams and to live a luxurious life. In the all conclusion, from all aforementioned points, I hold my view that tough time comes to
everyone but
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everyone, but
we have to hustle hard to get out
from
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of
the bad
situation
. It is too much important to take stands for our dreams and to put a happy smile in our family members and dear ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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