Many childhood experiences have lifelong impression on people. Write an essay you describe a memorable childhood experience and explain its effect on your life.

Film name was the
theif
a criminal who takes property belonging to someone else with the intention of keeping it or selling it
thief
theft
chief
of the dolls.I thought
film
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the film
is
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was
condy
a rich sweet made of flavored sugar and often combined with fruit or nuts
candy
comedy
and fun.But I was afraid.
when
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When
I was a little boy.My
father
and I've bee to India.Because my
father
worked in there.In one holiday my
father
said
me
refers to the speaker or writer
I
did go to see
a match criket
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a cricket match
a match cricket
.I didn't know what is
this
but I said "I agree.
Then
he gave two tickets in near playground.There
was
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were
a lot of people.
everybody
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Everybody
cheered beloved teams.The game started.But I didn't understand of
this
match.After 15
minuets
a written account of what transpired at a meeting
minutes
my
father
went to the shop in
stadium
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the stadium
and he gave two fruit
juice
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juices
.A player
shooted
the act of firing a projectile
shot
ball
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the ball
towards the audience.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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