With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The current population figures of the

world

are quite worried some. The ever increasing birth rate of humans has put a lot of stress on the resources available in

this

world

. The increase in population has

also

increased the demand for vehicles which in turn has made a global surge in the demand for

oil

and gas. In

this

essay, I will discuss about the about the harmful effects of discovering new areas of the

world

to access more resources

such

oil

and gas.

Firstly

, lets discuss about the effects of crude

oil

extraction from the seas and oceans on the marine life. Many countries in the

world

like US, Russia and India are the major players when it comes to crude

oil

extraction. Large equipments are installed in the water to extract

oil

and

this

is disturbing the habitat of sea animals. In the recent years, there have been numerous incidents of crude

oil

leak causing death to millions of fish. To add

further

, not just these incidents, but only set-up of

oil

companies in these areas is an attack on the nature and most sea animals are migrating to other areas because of threat to existence.

Secondly

, the increase in demand of

oil

and gas has increased the air

pollution

levels of almost all the countries which are there on the face of the earth. The vehicular emission is one of the primary reasons for the rise in air

pollution

levels, which is

further

impacting the nature by increase in temperature caused by ozone layer depletion. The humans face lot of health hazards because of

pollution

caused by the motor vehicles.

For instance

, the main reason for people having respiratory issues and skin cancer is the rise of harmful chemicals in the air. To conclude, I feel

instead

of discovering new areas and putting more pressure on the limited resources available in the

world

. We should look for innovation in the

oil

sector and more efforts should be put in the creation natural gas.

For example

, CNG has been widely used in India now, which is cheap and free from

pollution

as well.

Hence

, more

such

measures need to be taken which could help in saving the environment.

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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Finally
In a nutshell
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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

371 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

global demand
finite resources
energy consumption
exploiting
untouched ecosystems
carbon emissions
climate change
renewable energy
sustainable energy solutions
geopolitical consequences
territorial disputes
dependency

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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices is harmful to individuals and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Some people believe that international news should be included in the syllabus of secondary school students. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?