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Your friend asked you to teach his son English. You need to borrow some English books from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher requesting these materials. In your letter you should share: - Details about the child. - What type of books you need. - When and where you are going to teach this child

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Dear Mr. Brown, I, Mandeep Kaur; a student of Master of
English
 Literature at your renowned institute, am writing
this
 letter to request you borrow a few
English
 grammar books for one month only. A friend of mine is struggling to teach
English
 lessons to his son who is ten years old and a new immigrant in
this
 country. He is in fourth grade and facing challenges in making new friends because of his weak command of
English
. I have been living in Canada since 2011 and my friend asked me if I could give a few
English
 lessons to his son. To do so, I require some
English
 grammar vocabulary books for the intermediate level so that I can cover all essential topics
while
 teaching
this
 child. As my friend is living next to my house, I offered to send his son to my place every weekday at 5:00 pm after my office and class hours. I am planning to commence tutoring him on February 10th. I would be highly thankful to you if you consider my request. I will pick up books from the library on Tuesday evening. I am waiting for your prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Mandeep Kaur
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure clear logical structure throughout the letter. Group similar ideas together and use cohesive devices to connect sentences.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use appropriate opening and closing phrases in your letter to express politeness and respect towards the teacher.
Coherence & Cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each one centred around a single idea - introduction, request description, details about the child, specifications of materials needed, and the logistics of the tutoring arrangement.
Task Achievement
Aim for a complete response where all the tasks are fully addressed with sufficient detail.
Task Achievement
Maintain a formal and respectful tone throughout the letter. Avoid any informal language or slang when writing to a teacher.
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