Some people think that it is necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. Others say that books, films and the Internet can be used as a source of information about different cultures. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many people opine that travel is not necessary Due to documentary and the internet that had enabled one discover the world from the homeland. Personally, I believe that travel through film or internet are nothing to physical travelling experience and that for the reason below;
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, broadcast makes one learn about the cultural and social aspects of different countries. It gives limited information and physical presence. Emotion, feelings, sentiments and so could not be experienced, and I think that the best thing about travel is feeling the excitement and the enjoyment. Personally, I had seen a lot of broadcast about Tahiti, but, when I visited it, it is nothing compared to what I have seen or read about it; when I jumped the water off it was amazing and the water was blue and very transparent.
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, watching film is not very beneficial to develop the personality of a person. While, travelling is very advantageous because it helps acquire new qualities by talking to locals and learning about their thinking habits and tradition and history as well.
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, 88% of gap year graduates report that their gap year had consistently added to their personality. As one of travelling effect is leading a total behaviour transformation
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, travelling is so important because it is Borden the mind and it is a better space where people could learn a lot of valuable lessons and experiences.
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