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Some people feel that education should be provided exclusively by the state and private education should be prohibited. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In a world today where poverty continues to rise,
education
 & employment are the top priority problems that are to be solved. People from the poor sectors of the society are fighting for their rights of equality. They want to abolish the private
education
 & to have it be provided exclusively by the state among all individuals.
As a result
,
this
 will give all individuals an equal chance in getting a good job in the future. At some point, it is true that people who graduated from a private
school get better
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school to get better
 opportunities in finding a good job compared with those who graduated from a public
school
. They are seen to be more knowledgeable & competitive.
This
 is due to the quality of
education
 that they receive. In a private
school
, limited students are being assigned to each classroom
that is
 why the ratio of teachers to its students is
at
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on
 average. Teachers are able to provide one on one teaching to their students that's why more learning can occur, unlike in public schools where there are so many students compared to the ratio of the teachers and so the quality of good
education
 is not that achieved and less learning takes place. To the question if I agree that private
education
 should be prohibited, My answer is yes, I agree if the changes will be for the betterment of our society. If it will be the solution for the discrimination
that is
 very rampant these days. I am a product of private
education
 during my
school
 years, but I agree with the concept of making
education
 fair among everyone with the condition that the government should strive to provide a better quality of
education
 for its governance. Everyone has a right to good
education
 it is even stated in the constitution,
therefore
 the state should provide what is best for its people and in return, the state will benefit from its educated people
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