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Some people feel that education should be provided exclusively by the state and private education should be prohibited. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Government
 has a great influence on people’s life today. It can be seen in educational aspect
also
. It is believed that the responsibility for providing
education
 should be borne by
government
 and that private
education
 should be banned. It will be proven by discussing the advantages of banning private
education
 and in which circumstances private
education
 can be encouraged. On one hand, the standard of
education
 can be improved by banning private
education
.
For instance
, a majority of the private college professors have been taken long leave and working for the private educational institutions, as they pay higher amount of salary than the
government
 offers.
This
 has a huge impact on
government
 institutions.
This
 example clearly illustrates banning private
education
 will improve the standard of
education
 in terms of availability of professors, reduced financial burden on parents and a satisfactory economic level of
government
.
On the other hand
, in some special circumstances, it cannot forget the core value of private
education
.
For example
, in each state of a country,
government educational
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government, educational
 institutions are disproportional to the number of students. So the admissions are purely based on the academic merits. Here is the vital role of private
education
. Even though they demand a huge amount of money in the name of donation, parents are willing to enrol their children for the course as there is no other option to study. So
it
it is
it's
 obvious to allow the private
education
 in cases like increased demand for a course, increased number of students and the courses which cannot be run by the
government
 as the financial burden is more. In conclusion, after analysing the pitfalls of private
education
, it is believed that
government
 has the responsibility to provide the necessary
education
 to the public. It is predicted that
,
Accept space
,
 if the
government
 is adhering to the rules and regulations of
education
, the standard of
education
 can be maintained.
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