Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable.

Nowadays,
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and access to social networks has impacted us in all the walks of life and according to some people's opinion,
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innovations have made people more sociable.
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of all, nowadays
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has opened new opportunities in the way we communicate with another person living anywhere in the world. Now it is possible to connect, share information and communicate with people irrespective of their location.
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, now it has become easier to communicate with family and friends compared to the past when in order to contact a friend or relative, you had to use a landline phone and being indoors. Whenever I wish, I can call my parents or friends by using video calling application or just text them.
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progress in
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makes it easier for us to find and to be in touch with other people.
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, sometimes people are too frank on social networks. Very often people forget that social networks can haunt
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all their life long
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. According to some sources, before hiring an employee, employers can vet and verify a person and
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monitor him all the time.
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is a violation of freedom of action, but
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“checking” is practiced.
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, we must be wary of the people we add as friends. Some of them may be predators that can pry and snoop on your life.
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, some people believe that modern
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made us isolated, as people spend more time in the virtual world. We are divorced from the real world,
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of which we avoid going out to meet people.
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doesn't build relationships and
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taken away face-to-face interactions. People met and communicated with each other more regularly in the past. Personal
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is needed in developing very strong relationships that could
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for a lifetime. To conclude, in my opinion, modern
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has improved the lives of many people by making
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easy. Social networking can make people more sociable, as the Internet gives us a wide range of
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and great opportunities.
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, people must draw the line and understand how personal
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is important in our life. Internet
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can never substitute physically meeting and understanding each other in personal.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online marketplaces
  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
  • compare prices
  • decision fatigue
  • impulse buying
  • financial imprudence
  • privacy and data security
  • transformed
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
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