In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

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graduates are routinely taking a year of their education after convocation.

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, doing

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might lead to a spontaneous loss of interest in study while

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stunting their progress, they will

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experiences that will benefit them later in

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. In my own view, I would not encourage any student to suspend their education, in spite of, its rewards. Education is a continuous process that requires constant motivation. So, suspending one's schooling at any point can result in a general loss of interest in the process.

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is due to the fact that, young people are generally enticed by the independence in the case of travelling and the financial incentive that comes with working.

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is evident by, the astronomical number of high

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graduates that outright refuse to

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their education in Nigeria. In fact, new found freedom and better financial status could convince them to abandon schooling completely.

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, there are positives associated with high

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graduates taking a year break, for travelling of employment purposes. The greatest benefit of adopting

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line of thought, is that they would be to gain valuable

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experiences from interactions with strangers in their journeys or workplace.

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will develop their maturity and interpersonal relationship.

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general.

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, the experiences of my time as receptionist has been of assistance in my interactions with my patients as a nurse. To conclude, students are increasingly being advised to either try the labour market or explore the world for a year after graduation.

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has proven to increase the dropout rate significantly after high

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experience gained from taking

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

Your opinion

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

Write an email to your brother in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: • Name the destination you have in mind. • Briefly describe your previous experience in this place • Talk about some of this place's features

There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experiences or knowledge

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