Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.Some people,however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

Nowadays, governments say

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economy

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economic

progress

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is the most necessary for all

countries

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countries, however

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people think not only

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economy

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economic

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progress but

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progress, but

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other kind of

progress

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can be more vital for them. We will have very detailed discussions. I particularly agree with governments that’s why economic

progress

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is very significant and

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hand I

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hand, I

completely agree with

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people, therefore

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other types of

progress

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can improve counties and societies as well. Starting with the

first

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reason

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,

I can see that if

economy

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improve much more people can live very convenient and rate of unemployment

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reduces in the

country

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. The meanwhile, better

economy

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can create some good conditions for people in order to earn a lot of money and live

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more comfortably

.

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, in today’s

world people

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world, people

suffer from joblessness so I feel that good

economy

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plays important roles to reduce

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problem whole the world.

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, I imagine these kind of details can be better for people’s life. Moving on to the

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reason, I strongly believe governments should care of

education

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and

agriculture

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within

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country

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the country

a country

countries

.

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of all I would like to talk about

education

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so it can be very helpful to improve society and

country

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and it can

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grow up good children for

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the future

a future

of

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country

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the country

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Secondly

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, I am convinced if governments fund

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a huge amount

of money for developing

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agriculture they

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agriculture, they

will be able to achieve several successful in future. In the consequence,

education

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and

agriculture

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should be

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aiming

for governments as

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well, that’s

why they impact

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progress

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the progress

of countries very well. In my opinion, governments regularly should look for new ways for

progress

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of people and countries.

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Furthermore they

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Furthermore, they

should fund some money to useful items as well. In conclusion, governments should improve

economy

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with some ways and

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they should

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aim other kind of

progress

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as

education

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, transportation

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,

agriculture

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and tourism.