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You recently attended a course and would like to give feedback to the course organizer. Write a letter to the course organizer. In your letter: * explain which course you attended * describe what you enjoyed about the course * suggest one improvement for the future

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Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing
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 letter to review the course,which I have recently attended at
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Schulich School of Business. David Johnson conducted the Supply Chain workshop on 12th May 2026. He shared so much knowledge with all the students who were present.
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, there are a couple of things that I learned on that day.
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, Communication is the major key in team's success.
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, keeping short term goal is very Important. There was a small Supply Chain game during the lecture , which I enjoyed a lot.
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, the way David presented in front of the class was
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entertaining as it was a good mixture of Supply Chain and comedy. The only problem was the font of the slides , which was not very clear for the students who were sitting at the back of the classroom. Thank you for
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 a useful and informative course. I truly enjoyed participating and learned many valuable skills that will help me in my future career. Yours faithfully, Ayush Shukla

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coherence cohesion
Say your main points in a more clear way.
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Use link words like also, because, and however with more care.
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Explain your good points a little more.
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Keep the tone polite and do not add too many small details.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear start, middle, and end.
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You used a good opening and closing.
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You answered all parts of the task.
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Your tone is polite and fit for a formal letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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