Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
The diagram illustrates the man-made method of manufacturing
ethanol
fuel from corn
.
Overall
, there are nine stages in the process, begins with corns
Fix the agreement mistake
corn
are
harvested in Unnecessary verb
apply
the
huge field, and ends with Correct article usage
a
ethanol
fuel is
transported gas station.
In the first step, farmers harvest Wrong verb form
being
the
large amount of Change the article
a
corn
from fields, then
corn
is given in a storehouse. Subsequently
, corn
is crushed by milling
machine and it becomes a form powder; Correct article usage
a milling
thereafter
, corn
powder is mixed with water and it
is cookedCorrect pronoun usage
apply
4
hours. Change preposition
for 4
Following
this
, the mixture must pass a process of fermentation around
48 hours; after that, Change preposition
for around
liquid
substance is separated and Correct article usage
the liquid
sild
Correct your spelling
sold
Change preposition
as by-
by-
product. Now, Correct your spelling
by
this
liquid is called ethanol
and it is purified in 5 hours at laboratory
; Add an article
the laboratory
after
this
, it is stored in the
big containers and Correct article usage
apply
ethanol
fuel is transported gas station.Submitted by nguyennhancrazy on
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