Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
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The diagram illustrates the man-made method of manufacturing
ethanol
fuel from
corn
.
Overall
, there are nine stages in the process, begins with
corns
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are
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harvested in
the
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a
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huge field, and ends with
ethanol
fuel
is
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being
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transported gas station. In the first step, farmers harvest
the
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large amount of
corn
from fields,
then
corn
is given in a storehouse.
Subsequently
,
corn
is crushed by
milling
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machine and it becomes a form powder;
thereafter
,
corn
powder is mixed with water and
it
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is cooked
4
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hours.
Following
this
, the mixture must pass a process of fermentation
around
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48 hours; after that,
liquid
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the liquid
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substance is separated and
sild
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sold
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as by-
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by-
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by
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product. Now,
this
liquid is called
ethanol
and it is purified in 5 hours at
laboratory
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the laboratory
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;
after
this
, it is stored in
the
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big containers and
ethanol
fuel is transported gas station.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, corn with synonyms.
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