Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

#ethanol #fuel #corn

The diagram illustrates the man-made method of manufacturing

ethanol

fuel from

corn

Overall

, there are nine stages in the process, begins with

corns

Fix the agreement mistake

corn

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are

Unnecessary verb

apply

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harvested in

the

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huge field, and ends with

ethanol

fuel

Wrong verb form

being

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transported gas station. In the first step, farmers harvest

the

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large amount of

corn

from fields,

then

corn

is given in a storehouse.

Subsequently

corn

is crushed by

milling

Correct article usage

a milling

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machine and it becomes a form powder;

thereafter

corn

powder is mixed with water and

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apply

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is cooked

Change preposition

for 4

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hours.

Following

this

, the mixture must pass a process of fermentation

around

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for around

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48 hours; after that,

liquid

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the liquid

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substance is separated and

sild

Correct your spelling

sold

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as by-

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by-

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product. Now,

this

liquid is called

ethanol

and it is purified in 5 hours at

laboratory

Add an article

the laboratory

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;

after

this

, it is stored in

the

Correct article usage

apply

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big containers and

ethanol

fuel is transported gas station.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, corn with synonyms.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

138 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Task 1: The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

References from previous employers are important for some employers when making hiring decisions. Why do you think that references are important to employers? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

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Some people say showing program such as Olympics, cricket on television is the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Some say that there are some other ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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