Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Food
is
very important part
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a very important part
of
live
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living
life and the producing
food
for all
population
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populations
is always a hot topic.
while
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While
some people argue that all
kind
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kinds
of
food
produce by ourselves and less to
import
food
by
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from
other countries.
however
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However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
cannot
compleletly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
agree with the statement.
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,
plants
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plant
plant's
groth
(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growth
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growths
are
deped
the extent downward or backward or inward
depth
depend
of may things:
wheather
the atmospheric conditions that comprise the state of the atmosphere in terms of temperature and wind and clouds and precipitation
weather
,
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,
water
,
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,
land.
and
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And
inthis
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in this
world have a various type of atmosphere and land
thatswhy
some countries have a cold atmosphere ad some have a dry
.
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
they are not able to produce all
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kinds
kind
of
food
.
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These
will be
explanied
make plain and comprehensible
explained
by example
,
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,
canada
a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
have a
terraibel
exceptionally bad or displeasing
terrible
cold
condtion
a state at a particular time
condition
conditions
they
can ot produce
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can produce
can to produce
various
type
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types
of
food
.
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
they need to
import
food
by
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from
other countries
.
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.
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a
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coming next after the first in position in space or time or degree or magnitude
second
part, if countries stopped the
import
-export
food
is
damage
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damaging
globale economy
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the global economy
global economy
.
,
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,
if
,
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,
when
country
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a country
the country
is not
connect
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connected
with other
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
cultures
cities
in the world
its
it is
it's
become isolated.
for
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For
example
,
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,
in the world war time all countries
lockdown
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lock down
their places.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, no one can
import
and export
theire
of them or themselves
their
their e
there
food
and good.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
this
situation was
became
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becoming
a part of the
decrassed
facing or experiencing financial trouble or difficulty
distressed
depressed
deceased
economy
groth
(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growth
grows
great
.
to
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To
conclude, while some people think that their countries to produce all
food
for them and not need to
import
the
food
.
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.
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However
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
disagree with
this
view
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
this
will have some drawback and disadvantage.
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