In the developed world, average life expactancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that caould be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In modern life, human's lifespan has significantly improved than before. Due to medical achieving, economical improvements and increasing life quality in the
last
decades.
This
has made two major problems for people and communities, and I think one key issue should be implemented to tackle them. Of course, for the nine from ten youngsters, a long lifespan is the damnable target, but it has some negative effects for individuals and
also
society.
For example
,
firstly
, it can be an excessive financial burden on society and working people, because in my country there is a
such
a law that it is the "must" thing for government workers to give some kind of percent of their salary for people who unable to afford them with properties and medical items.
Secondly
, as elderly people are more sensitive to be sick. They are liable to catch some incurable disease,
for example
, nowadays like in all the countries of the world in my hometown
also
there is being an epidemical illness like " Koronavirus" (COVID-19). The latest research found that the most amount of infected people is studied, old people are being the most amount of infected and carriers of that virus.
However
, in my opinion, only one solution that should be addressed with problems, is increasing in the standard pension age of people.
For example
, in most countries, the average retirement age is 55 years old, and it should be extended to 60 or 65 years old, if they are able for working.
Therefore
, it would reduce the government's and
also
youngsters' and excessive financial burden. In conclusion, there is a huge financial impact on communities and people, it can easily be overcome by increasing elderly people's retirement age.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • age-related illnesses
  • financial burden
  • pension systems
  • working-age population
  • labor shortages
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • mental health issues
  • dependency ratio
  • healthy lifestyles
  • family-friendly policies
  • automation
  • technology
  • social programs
  • sustainability
  • incentives
  • retirement
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