Write an informal letter to a friend who has invited who has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation in 150 words

Dear Uzma, I am writing

this

letter as an acknowledgement of your invitation letter. Your letter came to me as a pleasant surprise amidst these tumultuous times that the world is witnessing right now. I’d have loved to see you and your son, Arham, in Virginia, but I am afraid I may not be able to any time sooner. My son, John, started his classes at the Cambridge University, I am sorry for not announcing it earlier than

this

. With him away, a lot of responsibilities have fallen on me. Even though I managed the entire house by myself, I now realize that managing the finances is tougher and he took care of that, all by himself. I hope that I may see you

year when John will be on his summer break and I will have a lot of time on my hands. Please let me know if you will be around and if

this

time suits you. Hoping to see you soon.

Love

Suggestion

Saran

Shrine

you, Sahreen

Tue Apr 14 2020

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

168 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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