More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

It is clear that nowadays more and more people are migrating to urban areas in search of job opportunities from rural areas.
However
,
this
has bought a devastating change with it.
This
essay will explore those results followed by some measures to solve them.
To begin
with, one of the major outcomes of
this
move is that cities have become over populated, which is directly associated not only with an increase in pollution level, but demand for the food and land to thrive
also
. To exemplify, a survey was conducted by the government nationals, which shows a threefold perk in population density of cities in comparison to the villages in
this
decade. Adding
further
, when people leave an area to relocate, the land there gets
salinised
, resulting in degraded soil quality, ultimately hampering the productivity of crops, which might result in increase prices of vegetables.
As a result
, people, who are poverty stricken, may not afford and left to starve.To substantiate an example, a survey conducted by PAU in 2018, clearly reveals lower crop production in Punjab because of
salinization
the act of colonizing; the establishment of colonies
colonization
. As there is a solution to every problem,
this
menace can be overcome by:
firstly
, efforts by the government to create awareness among people regarding
this
issue.
Secondly
, they should present additional funds for the farmers; to afford costly machinery for harvesting of crops.
Additionally
, better career opportunities for the students studying agricultural sciences; to allure the youth towards it.
Finally
, make farmers aware about hybrid technique; to increase the crop yield. In conclusion, I think moving
toth
Suggestion
to the
e
city
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
city
y
for
Suggestion
for a
a
job
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
job
b and better life has created enormous problems like soil degradation, pollution, starvation of the people, but some initiatives by the government can help to win
this
challenging condition
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