Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The growing awareness regarding the education has certainly revolutionised a various sector.

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has led to a mooted issue for the curriculum, which subjects are important and must be included, while other think there is no requirement to learn

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idea in the today’s world, so must be exploited. The essay will examine both the view with my stance examined in the below paragraphs.

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with, the main reason is to inculcate History in a school, which provides an enlightening of the trend followed in the past.

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help to a person who wants to nurture some morality and mythological story.

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, by starting

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a pedagogy for the people will generate the respectable image of their religion to an individual; even they start to celebrate their festivals.

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, In India many different religious people are living, even they were

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giving respect to their ritual and celebrate their special festival with each other.

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will generate a great harmony in the entire nation and makes a good society.

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, some think that the school must inculcate the subjects like a science, technology, which helps in the development. The

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reason is that

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topic will raise an individual’s analytical and thinking ability. As

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is the skills which would be helpful in the future study as well as in the job.

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, having a knowledge of technical subjects makes the person to earn a money, which improves the standard of living.

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, Science, is the subjects which providing the proof of the world in which we are living, even other can

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start their research on

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, subjects will be helpful for the development of a person and the nation having an educated professional. In conclusion,

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, History would be used to get an information about a various culture, religious and fashion people were following in the past, technical subjects can develop the mind and able to earn a money. As per my opinion, both are important to learn during primary school and after in the college it depends on an individual interest.

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