The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university.
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the proportion of colleagues who gave good ratings for various aspects of a university in three
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. It started off at just under
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in 2000, increased to the percentage of 72, in the following 5 years,
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the figure almost doubled in 2010.
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in the 2000s,
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year and the
last
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period,
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for 77
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. t It is interesting to note that the print and electronic source ratings were the same in 2010
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