Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the meantime, the revolution in technology makes a huge improvement in communication. Due to

this

development

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there is no need for using normal letters, as we can communicate

more conveniently

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more convenient

and fast. I totally agree with

this

opinion.

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essay will discuss my reasons in detail. I believe that modern ways of communications help us to save a lot of time, We can reach to each other faster. In the past, it

take

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took

takes

more than one month to deliver letters between countries, but now anyone can call his friend or his family by using mobile phones. Big companies can enhance their business provided that using the internet and mobiles.

For instance

government

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the government

in my

country Egypt

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country, Egypt

replace

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replaces

the letters by emails in internal communications. So using emails and modern applications are better that the letters.

Moreover

, it helps to create new opportunities for jobs. There are young businessmen start their own business through online websites, so it has a significant impact on

countries

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country's

revenues, as eCommerce

increase

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increases

the wealth

for

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many nations. Big companies create new departments like call

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

departments to enhance their business and hired a plethora of employees to do

this

mission. As an example,

Amazon company

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an Amazon company

hired more than hundred customer service agents

last

year in Egypt. To sum up, using devices and internet better than sending letters. Most of the big companies around hired programmers to create new ways to make communications faster.

young

(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth

Young

youth

understand

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understands

the important role of technology in communication, they

do not promoted

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do not promote

in his workplace unless he has all knowledge about modern communication.

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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

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