It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not?

Now, in our modern world, some kind of relationship is broken only a reason for borrowing
money
.
it
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It
is my personal
opinion if
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opinion, if
you
borrowing
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are borrowing
borrow
money
from your
friend
and never
return
it so in that case it harms your
friendship
.
on
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On
the other side if you
return
it
on
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at
the
time
it
can not
can not
cannot
harm your
friendship
.
now
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Now
I discuss both of view and support my answer.
Firstly
, talk about the bright side, I think that borrowing
money
from a person who is close to you is normal.
imagine
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Imagine
that someone could need to help and no doubt that his or her
friend
offer to help.
for
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For
example, a couple of weeks ago, my best
friend
need some
money
so he contacted me and told me that, please gave me some
money
. I was fully sure that he never betray with me.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
I gave him
money
.
after
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After
some
time which
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time, which
time
he told me he
come
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is coming
and
return
my
money
.
my
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My
this
storey purpose is if you
return
borrowing
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borrowed
money
it never harm your
friendship
. On the dark side, if you
borrowing
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are borrowing
borrow
money
from a person and never
return
, it would harm your
friendship
.
someday
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Someday
ago my
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ago, my
friend
borrowed
money
from me. I was not sure about him, but he requested to me
to he needs
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he needs money
money
for some important reason. So I believed and gave
money
.
after
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After
that when I call him, he never picked up my phone or never replied to my messages.
in
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In
that case he avoided me and never contacted me to
return
my
money
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
in that
time
it
had harming
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has harmed
our
friendship
. To sum up, I think that borrowing
money
and returning at that
time
, it will help to keep your
friendship
stronger and never cut the
relationshp
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
.
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