It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not?

#money #friend #harm #damage #friendship

Now, in our modern world, some kind of relationship is broken only a reason for borrowing

money

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is my personal

opinion if

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opinion, if

you

borrowing

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are borrowing

borrow

money

from your

friend

and never

return

it so in that case it harms your

friendship

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the other side if you

return

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the

time

can not

cannot

harm your

friendship

now

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Now

I discuss both of view and support my answer.

Firstly

, talk about the bright side, I think that borrowing

money

from a person who is close to you is normal.

imagine

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Imagine

that someone could need to help and no doubt that his or her

friend

offer to help.

for

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For

example, a couple of weeks ago, my best

friend

need some

money

so he contacted me and told me that, please gave me some

money

. I was fully sure that he never betray with me.

to a very great extent or degree

I gave him

money

after

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After

some

time which

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time, which

time

he told me he

come

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is coming

and

return

money

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this

storey purpose is if you

return

borrowing

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borrowed

money

it never harm your

friendship

. On the dark side, if you

borrowing

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are borrowing

borrow

money

from a person and never

return

, it would harm your

friendship

someday

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Someday

ago my

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ago, my

friend

borrowed

money

from me. I was not sure about him, but he requested to me

to he needs

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he needs money

money

for some important reason. So I believed and gave

money

after

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After

that when I call him, he never picked up my phone or never replied to my messages.

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that case he avoided me and never contacted me to

return

money

to a very great extent or degree

in that

time

had harming

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has harmed

our

friendship

. To sum up, I think that borrowing

money

and returning at that

time

, it will help to keep your

friendship

stronger and never cut the

relationshp

a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)

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