Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Severity
Suggestion
The severity
of penalties
is
Suggestion
has been
a highly discussed topic since centuries. It is thought by many people that criminals done
same actions
Suggestion
the same actions
should be punished equally without taking into consideration their motives or other relative circumstances.
However
, it is suggested by the others that the motive behind each individual carrying out wrongful action, their situation and condition should be considered when giving punishment. In my opinion, even though fixed penalties may seem to have contributed to the encouragement of
equality
, regarding each individual's own condition when punishing the unlawful behaviour provides more just environment. Supporters of fixed penalties argue that in order to promote
equality
among wrongdoers there is a need to charge each of them by the same punishment. The judges might act
arbitrarly
in a random manner
arbitrarily
arbitrary
and sometimes defectively when making a decision.
This
happens when rulers give much more importance to their feelings than the existing fact.
Moreover
, there is a limited knowledge regarding the problem encountered.
In other words
, the
court
is merely aware of the information which has shown them
at
Suggestion
in
the courtroom.
This
may lead to false judgement and
therefore
inaccurate penalties.
Furthermore
, the
court
decisions may be appealed by the other party and
as a result
higher
court
reverses that judgement. Take,
for example
, a conducted study suggests that 38 percent of the
judgments
Suggestion
judgment
reversed
last
year in Russia.
On the other hand
, the
consept
an abstract or general idea inferred or derived from specific instances
concept
concepts
of
equality
and the justice are not always overlap, the latter is a far wider and complex term. Every criminal has
different motivation
Suggestion
different motivations
a different motivation
and purpose of conducting a
crime
Suggestion
criminal
.
Therefore
, treating them equally would contribute to the disruption of our morality and understanding of
equality
by culminating in unfairness.
For example
, a child who stole some milk from the supermarket and the person who steals some perfume or clothes should be punished
distictively
in an identifiably distinctive manner
distinctively
, even the acts have the same name as theft from the perspective of law.
Otherwise
, the society would be
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
poorly. In conclusion, despite the possibility of the
court
's emotional ruling and
thus
necessity
Suggestion
the necessity
to prohibit those unfair conclusions, I believe that flexible and variable decisions better serve for justice and the existing moral values in a society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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