Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town. Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you think the decision is wrong say what you think the council should do instead

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to let you know about the consequences of the local council's decision to replace the

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with a parking facility. I have been living in Central Town, Jalandhar since 2002, and I plan to live in the same area for my entire life. Yesterday, I read an article in the local newspaper that the local council has decided to build a car

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at the site of Greenland

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which is a one-of-a-kind in our residential area. The construction has not started yet;

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, I would like you to reconsider your decision. Being a local resident, other dwellers and I use

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for our routine recreational activities as our residents have less space.

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, children play in the evening, and old people walk

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spend some time there to communicate with others.

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, youngsters spend time here for exercise and social activities.

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, I request you to search for other alternatives to construct a parking area because

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has a tremendous importance in our lives. May I suggest something? Either the council can build the underground parking at supermarkets or the pre-existing double-storey parking building could be converted into a high-rise building to save horizontal space. I am hoping for a better solution to save

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. Yours faithfully, Amandeep Kaur

immysandhu94Sat Jun 01 2024

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Consider providing more specific examples or evidence to bolster your argument. This could include data, quotes from other residents, or references to similar situations in other towns.

coherence cohesion

While the letter is well-structured, ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next. Phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' can enhance the logical flow.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow.

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The writing tone is polite and formal, suitable for addressing a mayor.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph presents a single idea, contributing to the clarity and effectiveness of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

226 words

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