Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town. Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you think the decision is wrong say what you think the council should do instead

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to let you know about the consequences of the local council's decision to replace the
park
with a parking facility. I have been living in Central Town, Jalandhar since 2002, and I plan to live in the same area for my entire life. Yesterday, I read an article in the local newspaper that the local council has decided to build a car
park
at the site of Greenland
Park
which is a one-of-a-kind in our residential area. The construction has not started yet;
therefore
, I would like you to reconsider your decision. Being a local resident, other dwellers and I use
this
park
for our routine recreational activities as our residents have less space.
Not to mention
, children play in the evening, and old people walk
as well as
spend some time there to communicate with others.
Moreover
, youngsters spend time here for exercise and social activities.
Hence
, I request you to search for other alternatives to construct a parking area because
this
park
has a tremendous importance in our lives. May I suggest something? Either the council can build the underground parking at supermarkets or the pre-existing double-storey parking building could be converted into a high-rise building to save horizontal space. I am hoping for a better solution to save
this
park
. Yours faithfully, Amandeep Kaur
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Consider providing more specific examples or evidence to bolster your argument. This could include data, quotes from other residents, or references to similar situations in other towns.
coherence cohesion
While the letter is well-structured, ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next. Phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' can enhance the logical flow.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow.
task achievement
The writing tone is polite and formal, suitable for addressing a mayor.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph presents a single idea, contributing to the clarity and effectiveness of the letter.
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