The government's investment in art, music and theater is a wast of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extant do you agree with this statement?
Arts, Music and
theatre
are a huge sector to the government
for earning the money
. Using money
in the public services is a necessary but divert funds from the entertainment to public services is not an appropriate.
To begin
, the entertainment industry is generating a huge amount of money
as well as providing the employment. Because of the employment, government
will be getting ample amounts of tax from this
area. In addition
, money
gets from the theatre
are used in military and defence system development and in improvement for public services. So, it's all come to the public at the end. Here, I want to elaborate how government
is making money
from arts, Music and theatre
. Firstly
, any show will not executed by one person, secondly
organizer will have to get permission from the local political party. Thirdly
, there are many people, including making one event successful like stage developers, caters for food and drink services, light men, cameraman, sound team etc.
On the other side, if the government
will use totally funds in the public services that it will close the doors for earn extra money
. In addition
, government
should not charge more than a set limit on services like bus and train fares. Furthermore
, this
service can not generate that much employment.
To sum up, I can say that government
should invest funds in the both sides as both are for public and invested funds are also
come from public. So, I do not agree government
is wasting funds by investing in art, Music and theatre
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