With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised to access to the internet in order to meet and chat with their friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with the problem?
Social media have developed at a fast pace in the
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15 years and many social networks offer unsupervised access to them. Many of teenagers use them to text their friends and play games. Linking Words
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has become a problem that can lead to possible risk situations.
In fact, teenagers all over the world can face a huge problem with social media. Linking Words
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In an attempt to find solutions, parents need to enlighten their young adults on the disastrous consequences of chatting with people on the internet so that they do not fall victims. Linking Words
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, parents can periodically monitor chats and messages of their teens to ensure that they are not receiving any threats or illicit images from the people they socialize with. Linking Words
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, a recent report by the BBC has revealed that parents who supervise their children’s online activities are twice likely to discover any usual activity and take necessary action than those who do not do Linking Words
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In conclusion, young people use the internet daily to interact with various people online without any guidance and Linking Words
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makes them fall prey to cyber crime. In order for children to be out of harm’s way, parents should keep an eye on their communications and give them advice, and social media companies need to provide apps that are suited for them.Linking Words
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