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Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits Discuss both views and give your opinion

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me folks uphold it as a positive trend whilst ot
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avelling a lot can create the atmosphere of stress and efficiency.
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Hence
this
 trend may affect the health of the individuals.
Moreover
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mmuting by cars and personal vehicles from far may eventually lead traffic problems and detrimental impact on environment as burning hefty sum of fuel is hazardous for the society.
Furthermore
, spending more
time
 while travelling may affect the civilians mentally as people would get ir
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irritated
nd frustrate to following the same travelling daily routine.A recent survey of Ti
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the Times
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percent of workers are upset as they do not able to spend enough
time
 with their families due to the wastage of
time
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travel
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the office
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the majority
f people and students have their wo
rk places a
a place where work is done
workplaces
nd schools in metropolitan cities and renting a house would be more expensive and unaffordable for middle class people.
As a result
, they prefer to
travel
 more rather than paying rent.
In addition
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st of the individual commute more regularly due to their family member as they would be able to spend some
time
 with their family members and share the everyday experience with them.To exemplify:-
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My father used to
travel
 around 60 km everyday from home, merely to give fe
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a few hours
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disadvantages, but
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this
 trend help individual to maintain the balance between workplace and family member for the better foreseeable future

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