News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

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There is no doubt that news plays a crucial role of influencing people's decisions. Many people consider news to be an important part of their

lives

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life

This

essay is going to focus on several issues pertaining to news and support them with relevant examples. News is important to people because it is the only source of information

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about

whats

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what's

happening in the world.

Citizens

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Citizen

watch news to stay updated with what events are

occuring

come to pass

occurring

in their neighbourhood, and the world.

For example

, a person may invest in

stock market

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the stock market

and might watch news to

understad

know and comprehend the nature or meaning of

understand

understood

what is happening in the market, so that he can plan his actions

accordingly

Furthermore

, many people watch

news

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the news

during election season so that they can decide a worthy candidate for the nation. Taking advantage of its popularity, many news channels these days are focusing more on bad news creating a sense of fear among people. They do

this

because bad news

attract

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attracts

more people than good news, and helps to increase a media outlets popularity.

For example

, a government policy in

India which

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India, which

was bad received a backlash from people, but the same policy when amended based on public opinion did not even

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

praise

something given for victory or superiority in a contest or competition or for winning a lottery

prize

price

Although

people are more attracted to bad news, I believe that

media

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the media

should focus on both good and bad news equally.

This

becuase

for the reason that; on account of

because

, if

media

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the media

just focused on good news people might start ignoring the bad.

For example

, in my country when

media

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the media

reported a good news that the number of COVID-19 cases had started to reduce people started coming out and neglected the epidemic,

however

the truth was that we were only testing the patients with symptoms and the media had neglected it, which could have had an

advere

contrary to your interests or welfare

adverse

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

because COVID-19 patients can be asymptotic as well. To conclude, in my opinion, news media rather than using the popularity of news for their own advantage should focus on providing

transperent

transmitting light; able to be seen through with clarity

transparent

information to the citizen.

Wed Apr 15 2020

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News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

Fully explain your ideas

People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Some people say the feeling of competition should be encouraged in children while others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?