Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often said that
music
has a magical power to connect and unite people without any cultural backgrounds or generation barriers. I disagree with
this
and will demonstrate my opinion with two reasons: culture and age have a great influence on how people perceive it and the impact of
music
on the cohesion between the fan groups of different musical genres. Audiences who do not come from one’s country or the same generation will be interested in other kinds of
music
because nationality affects its citizens which makes them familiar with some types of
music
rather than others. Old and young people are
also
affected by life’s experiences or lifestyle.
For instance
, Indian
music
which has a long story and many illogical episodes or the
music
came from the US with so many noisy sounds, up and down, both of them were hated by me - a Vietnamese. The group, whose love with one musical genre will be isolated from another.
Music
fans just enjoy their
music
line, feel happy and relaxed when listening to that kind of
music
like country
music
fans, they are unfamiliar with rock
music
, noise
music
instruments or beat too fast.
For example
, I fall in love with country
music
and enjoy bolero, but I have to listen to nursery rhymes which my nephew prefers because taking care of him when his parents got out is my responsibility. It makes me tired and stressed, so I do not want to be beside him anymore, each time. In conclusion, I believe that
music
is powerful and magical in connecting people, but depending on their
music
style.

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