Research indicates that nowadays some consumers are much less influenced by advertising than in the past. What do you think are the reasons for this?Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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the development of independent reasoning and partly results from an increasingly hostile social atmosphere where all influences on others are considered Linking Words
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psychological manipulation.
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to begin
with the cheerful aspect of the phenomenon, say, as an indication of the development of individual independence. Given the nature of Linking Words
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to a certain extent suggests the improvement of Use synonyms
overall
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society
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This
opinion is supported by research from Harvard, which concludes that the subjects with higher independence are more unlikely to change their decisions by refining Linking Words
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. From Use synonyms
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perspective, the phenomenon seems to be positive.
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, a sword must have two edges, and the other edge of the issue is that the repulsion for Linking Words
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implies an atmosphere of universal distrust. For many Use synonyms
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, politicians and education are the same in their attempt to influence us. Use synonyms
In other words
, they are all manipulating us, merely in different ways. The kind of distrust leaking from the repulsion for Linking Words
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has secretly undermined the basis of our Use synonyms
society
. Wayne · C. Booth, one of the most influential critics of the 20th century warned of the collapse of Use synonyms
society
if we did not take the issue seriously. Seen from Use synonyms
this
perspective, the phenomenon may imply that our Linking Words
society
is suffering from the overgrowth of individual independence.
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people
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suggests the development of personal reasoning, which is cheerful. Use synonyms
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, the same issue Linking Words
also
indicates that we are perhaps struggling with universal distrust, which needs more serious consideration.Linking Words
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