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An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #internet #socialise
It is irrefutable that nowadays people prefer to meet with others using the
internet
as a
result it
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result, it
 have minimized distance of contact people with each other.While it argued to create problems as degradation of speech and isolation from real life people.In my personal
opinion I
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opinion, I
 claim that
,
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,
although
,
internet
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the internet
have
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has
adverse impact
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an adverse impact
 on
relationship
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the relationship
relationships
 between some people, it
have beneficially effected
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has beneficially effected
beneficially effected
 our society. On the one
hand many
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hand, many
 people think that after
development
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the development
 of modern technology people got stacked to their phones
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.
In other words
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people are spending more time with their Mobile device, rather than with real people.
Therefore people
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Therefore, people
 become isolated from real life, and in some cases become
sociophobe
.
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it may cause degradation of speech owing to non using it.
On the other hand
,
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,
internet
 beneficially effected humanity in the way of distance decreasing.
In other words
, nowadays people should not leave their homes or countries to do something.
For instance
, now people are able to talk with their friends or relatives even without visiting them.
Aditionally people
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Additionally, people
Additionally people
 can learn other
nations
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nation's
 culture before going there and to choose to go or not.
Finally
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in my opinion,
internet
 effects everyone differently. Take
for example
 frauds and hackers,
internet
 for them is like water for fish, owing to its anonymity they can pretend to be a friend, and steal or hack bank accounts or devices
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.
In contrast
, it
have
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has
 positively affected students and tourists
,
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now they can real information from people about country or university which they are planning to visit or enter. To conclude, it is certainly true that
internet
 users with common ideas integrating with each other and realise their dreams
,
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whereas some of the become
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socially
 isolated and get lost in the
internet
.

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