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Television Sporting shows such as the Olympics motivate the youth who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree?

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Digitalised telecast of sporting events like Olympics being shown in the television impacts the younger generation who is unlikely to involve themselves in any kind of exercise boosts them up and urges them to involve in any forms of physical activity. In my opinion,
this
 is not the case and I don't agree with
this
 notion.
Firstly
, for a wellbeing of an individual in life we need to maintain our health.Indeed, exercise or any sporting events play a vital role here by burning unwanted calories we ate,
In addition
 to that, it
also
 reduces the stress that we tend to develop in our routine life.
For instance
, when an individual regularly does workouts his cholesterol levels in the body are maintained and he is less likely to get a cardiac arrest.
Therefore
, maintaining good health is the fundamental requirement in life.
Secondly
, the interest cannot be emphasised or insisted through external sources. A lot people in the society assume that watching sporting events and attending workshops or seminars would change the perception of the particular man and lead him to involve in any kind of fitness activities.
For example
, let us consider a guy who has an inadvertent attitude toward his health you cannot transform him by showing video clips or motivational speeches. Even though you make desperate efforts, he would end up remaining as a mediocre. In conclusion, the idea of being fit and following a healthy lifestyle is a matter of choice of individuals, Unless that particular person is aware of it no one in
this
 world or any multimedia sources can modify them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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