“Prevention is better than cure”. Out of country’s health budget, a proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what do you extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying in the saying that precautionary measures taken beforehand are better than cure. It is suggested by a few people that the expenditure of the government on healthcare should be divided between

treatment

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and providing

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education

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and preventive measures. I agree with the given notion, as it will be fruitful for people in various aspects.

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, a large amount of

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is expended by the higher authorities by constructing infrastructure on treating people who have diseases that can be prevented easily.

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, mouth cancer is mainly caused by chewing tobacco, but if people refrain from doing so, they will not get

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disease.

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can be done when the government allocates a certain amount of funds to

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people regarding the potential drawbacks of tobacco.

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, much amount of

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can be saved that

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has to be spent on their

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.

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is because creating awareness among people is relatively easier than

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that can be done through seminars, imparting

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in schools, and advertisements.

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, providing

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education

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and giving knowledge about pre-emptive measures brings results that are beneficial in

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run. To illustrate, when children are taught about the importance of

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in schools, they are less likely to indulge in activities,

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as consuming alcohol and chewing tobacco, that are deleterious for their

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. Not only

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will give children a healthy

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childhood, but

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children will adopt a salubrious lifestyle for the rest of their lives. When

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approach is compared to giving

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to disease-stricken people, it turns out to be more advantageous, as it abstains people from adopting an unhealthy lifestyle in the

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place. To conclude, a share of

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from a

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budget dedicated to providing

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education

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and popularizing the trend of exercising caution is a feasible approach in preventing diseases.

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approach provides long term benefits. The government,

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, should divert

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towards

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education

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and prevention measures.