air travel can travel only benefit the richrst people in the world.ordinary prople can get no advantage with the developmeny of air travel .to what do you agree or disagree

since
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Since
in
contemprary era
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the contemporary era
contemporary era
travelling play
a
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an
important role in the whole world.
it
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It
is irrefutable that only
wealthiest
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wealthy
wealthier
people
travel
by
air
all
ovet
at a higher position than
over
the world.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am disagree
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disagree
am disagreeing
have disagreed
that common man can't
travel
by
air
. b1.
in
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In
the
contemprary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
era great changes occurred as
compare
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compared
to rudimentary era
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
racken
expect, believe, or suppose
reckon
that in previous years ago
only richest person
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only richest people
bought
ticket
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tickets
and
travel
by
air but
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air, but
now business
compitation higher
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competition, higher
competition higher
and airlines
ower
(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business
owner
tower
were
also
offers some low rate tickets where a user can buy online before fews day
.
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.
on
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On
the other
hand if
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hand, if
a common man has not sufficient
fund
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fund, then
then
they can get benefits from tourist directly or indirectly
.
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.
for
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For
instance during
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instance, during
summer vacation in
india lot
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an India lot
India lot
India lots
of
tourist
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tourists
came and spend holidays they book
hotal's
a building where travelers can pay for lodging and meals and other services
hotels
,
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,
buy some necessities things
also
thus
a
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an
ordinary
men
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man
got advantageous
.
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.
further more
in addition
Furthermore
Further more
,
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,
we
also
learn
a
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an
essential information related to his culture and language.
in
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In
conclusion
,
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,
there are different way to
travel but
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travel, but
also
ordinary man
travel
by
air
.

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