Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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modern society, it's

very popular to order ready-made

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from restaurants, rather than cooking at

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. The main reason for

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a tendency may be cheap prices in some restaurants

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, people's desire to save some

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cooking. Even though ordering

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has some obvious advantages, it's disadvantages shouldn't be underestimated. On the one hand, ordering prepared

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may the best

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for a busy person, who does not have enough

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for preparing

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, cleaning. Cooking

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requires a considerable amount of

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time,

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time, moreover, the

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the cleaning process may take even more

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and resources than cooking itself.

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, cooking a simple dish

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as chicken with rice at

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requires significant amounts of water and electricity for electrical appliances

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as the oven and dishwasher.

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, having an opportunity to order

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from a restaurant will save a lot of

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, electricity and water.

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, eating made-

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from restaurants has own disadvantages. A dramatic disadvantage is not having any information about the ingredients used in the meals. With high demand, grow the volumes of required products, which sometimes can affect the quality of

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purchasing

produce.

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, it's a very common practice in some restaurants to make salads from products that are about to go bad and mask the rotten scent by adding some chemicals and spices.

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, some restaurants may use poor quality products or chemicals for boosting taste and preservatives, which may have a negative effect on the customer's health in the long run. To sum up, ordering

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from restaurants may be tempting

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for people who have no

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for cooking at

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approach has a critical

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disadvantage of not being

disadvantage of being not

informed about ingredients used in the meal, which can have destructive consequences.

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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

Your opinion

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