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Transport preferences among young people from different countries

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The line graph illustrates the transport preferences (
car
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, motorcycle and bicycle) among young people in Great Britain, USA, Germany and France. Overall, the
car
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 is most preferred by young adults in Great Britain, USA and France.
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, young people in Great Britain, Germany And France prefer using the motorcycle the least. Looking at the details, young people in France have the highest percentage of using the
car
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, which is about 75% among four countries. Both Great Britain and USA are
second
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 in place with 60% of young people favouring the
car
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. In comparison, young people in Germany prefer using the bicycle the most at about 45%.
On the other hand
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, the motorcycle is least used in Great Britain, Germany and France, at about 10%, 15% and 18% respectively. For the young people in the USA, they favour using the bicycle the least (10%) among the four countries.

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