Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like soccer while other people believe that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that sports are required in order to increase people’s lifestyle
such
as health. Some people say that participating team
sports is
more effective meanwhile others insist that self sports are more useful than Suggestion
are
team
sports. This
essay will address the both sides of sporting.
First
of all, great teamwork comes from great
communication. When people attend the Suggestion
greater
team
workout their co-operation would be increased. For example
, when they play soccer or basketball they need to interact with their members to score and win a game, so it leads the good social skills of
them. Suggestion
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to
Furthermore
, social relationship is also
grown due to the fact that they respect their
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are respected in their
are respected their
team
members and understand the enemy team
. In other words
, people are able to learn what politeness is throughout the play. So, it affects people’s social communication.
On the other hand
, individual exercises make people isolate. It is not necessary to concern any other people during self workout and people just concentrate on their activities what
they dSuggestion
what their activities
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are doing
For instance
, when they do individual sports such
as bodybuilding they look like lonely comparing soccer. Moreover
, people who do themselves are going to be selfish because they do not interact with another
people.
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other
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are important when it comes to improving people’s life. In spite of the fact that some exercises are not having good result for people we have to respect what they choose fSuggestion
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