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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #e- #books #technology #newspaper #magazines
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The
technology
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 was growing
day
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 by
day
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 and
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 provide us many different ways for updating by different news while some people believe that modern
technology
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 will totally replace newspaper I partially agree from that statement and give my own viewpoint in the upcoming paragraph:)
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, with the help of
technology
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 it is not possible to access books in our pocket and whenever we want we easily read books and gather information from different books that are the most interesting feature of a books the craziest factor of ebooks are one single click search you will able to access your favorite
book
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 without paying much money.
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, E-Books are providing a feature where we can able to keep our recommendation directly to the
book
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 owner and if you feel something fake or not good for children we can easily remove the
book
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 from store and e-books
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 give the option for sharing our
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
book
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 with our relatives and
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 with our family.
On the other hand
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 newspaper, a very cheap source and everybody can easily able to a
forth
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forth, moreover
moreover
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 many old books are on the published on
paper we
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paper, we
 cannot able to read that books
online read
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online, read
 books on E-Books
is
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are
 very harmful to eyesight but not harmful while reading
on
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of
newspaper
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newspapers
the newspaper
 To be concluded, well
technology
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was grow
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grew
day
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 by
day
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 for our
comfort but
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comfort, but
 comfort is not always
good sometimes
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good, sometimes
 we
do
engage in
make
 some effort because the effort is always good for our health.

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