To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if the children are not taught history?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • historical consciousness
  • cultural heritage
  • heritage preservation
  • forewarned is forearmed
  • historical figures
  • technological advancements
  • analytical skills
  • cultural awareness
  • progression of society
  • historical context
  • intellectual development
  • social cohesion
  • global perspective
  • past atrocities
  • critical thinking
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