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Task 2 People live longer in some part of the world. What do you think is the reason of this? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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In the
twenteeth
coming next after the nineteenth in position
twentieth
century we
Accept comma addition
century, we
 can find different living rates around the world, in some countries population tend to live much
more longer
Suggestion
longer
 than in others. I certainly believe that
this
happend
come to pass
happened
 because
the better
Suggestion
the good
life
 quality and good incomes that residents in developed countries can have in
comparation
joint operation or action
cooperation
comparison
 with developing countries' inhabitants. In
this
 essay I will give some examples. In developed nations, people have high-quality
health
 services provided by the government while in developing countries they barely have
access
 to some services in
deplomentary
 conditions. All those who can have
access
 to
health
 services as soon as they get sick and pay their prescriptions can recover faster without serious detriment in their
health
,
on the other hand
, those who cannot get a consult with a
health
 professional may decide to stay home and try to recover with rest only,
consequently
, some
derivated
 complications could emerge.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, inhabitant in more
unfortunated
not favored by fortune; marked or accompanied by or resulting in ill fortune
unfortunate
 nations drop out studies and eventually their possibilities to get a well-paid job are really low. Families with low incomes do not have a diet with enough nutrients which means that their antibodies will not be enough for a fast recovery and prolonged
life
spams
the complete duration of something
spans
.
Accept space
.
 To summarize, population in developed countries can have
access
 to a good-quality
life
 and better incomes that give them more chances to prolong their
life
 due to fast
access
 to doctors, treatments and an ample
resourse
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resource
 of nutrition
inthe
Suggestion
in the
 good food they can afford. Poorer people tend to detriment their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
 because of their economic
limitetions
a principle that limits the extent of something
limitations
 and few
health
servicies
performance of duties or provision of space and equipment helpful to others
services
 they can have.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • longevity
  • lifespan
  • preventive medicine
  • chronic diseases
  • public health initiatives
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • nutrition
  • wellness
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • demographic shift
  • geriatrics
  • social security
  • sustainability
  • overpopulation
  • quality of life
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