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Cricket has become more popular than the national sports

#cricket #sports
Undoubtedly,
cricket
 is the most popular
sport
 in subcontinental countries because there is hardly any part of
this
 region where
cricket
 is not played and relished. Though they have their national sports,
cricket
 has gained far more popularity. Hereby, I will throw some light on some of the possible reasons behind
this
 phenomenon. The predominant reason, why
cricket
 has become so popular among subcontinental nations is that
this
sport
 was introduced to them by the British during the colonial period. Most countries in
this
 area became familiar with the rules and regulations of
this
 game and started playing it and
then
 ultimately becoming proficient in it.
Moreover
, these developing nations have imitated English culture for a long, whether it is a style, language and
sport
, and
importance
Suggestion
the importance
 of English language in these countries is convincing enough evidence of the fact that whatever was introduced by the English in their occupied countries continued to be flourished. Moving
further
, the national sports like hockey, Kabaddi, Volleyball and so on have limited international tournaments, whereas
cricket
 has various events like ICC
Cricket
 World Cup, IPL, Ashes Series, ICC World Twenty-20 and many more.
Therefore
,
cricket
 gets a lot more media coverage than any other national games in these countries.
As a result
, everyone has a special affinity towards
cricket
 and cricketers as well, especially youngsters who have a profound passion for
this
sport
. Teams like India, Pakistan, Australia, South Africa and Sri Lanka have been world
champions multiple
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champions, multiple
 times while others are emerging powers in
cricket
. So it is only natural that they have a huge number of fans who enjoy
cricket
 to the fullest. To recapitulate,
cricket
 dominates the sports world, particularly in countries like India, Bangladesh, Pakistan, Sri Lanka, Australia and South Africa, which have gone through the influence of English culture during the English colonial era and where
this
sport
 is considered a part of national pride due to their success and
fanbase
Suggestion
fan base
.
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