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Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.

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There is no denying of the fact that
machine
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 manufacture
product
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 faster than human,
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man
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 made items have their own authenticity. Few products need the keen attention to detail which is only possible by hand
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 to manufacture at large scale machines are used.
This
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 essay will examine the pros and cons of both type and will provide necessary illustration.
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 21st century, mass
production
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 is a problem which can be tackled by machines only. As they can run restlessly to meet the requirements.
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, machines are used in monotonous
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,
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, to manufacture a
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 over and over again machines are best suited for it.
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, in packing of chips machines are used as they are more efficient and effective which eventually increases the profit of the company. Machines are
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 very popular for rigorous jobs
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 as making of tools which require high precision and they are less likely to commit errors.
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,
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 made things are more valuable and admired across the globe. A
man
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’s work on a
product
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 increases its value greatly,
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, consider painting. Painting is unique and are the creative work of an artist, which have lots of value. No
machine
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 can achieve that level of excellence. In case of ornaments and jewellery, design plays a vital role and it’s been handmade only.
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, it is the fact that
man
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 made products are priced high as compared to
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 made items. To conclude, both
man
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 made and
machine
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 made having their potential advantages and disadvantages. Foremost in mass
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 machines are preferred and in artistic work handmade things have value, In my opinion, but, when
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 of
product
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 collision with these two method it comes to the personal preference.

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