Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays,
air
pollution
has become a major issue all around the world. Some people think that the main reason of
air
pollution
is
most usage
Suggestion
more usage
of cars. So one
day
should be
international car free
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an international car free day, which
an international car free day which
the international car free day which
day
which is
most effective method
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the most effective method
to reduce
air
pollution but
Accept comma addition
pollution, but
others believe that there are more others ways to reduce it.
This
essay looks into both views with personal opinion.
To begin
, some mortals think that an international car-free
day
is an effective method to reduce
air
pollution
because nowadays more than half percentage of
public
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the public
are using the private vehicles which
emmit
expel (gases or odors)
emit
the
fatel
bringing death
fatal
gases in the
air
. These gases are very dangerous for human health.
For example
, in Delhi city where roads are very congested due to driving the cars effect to the environment. For
this
, in that city, the temperature is always high and there is no fresh or clean
air
to breath. If one
day
will be free from cars, there could be
keep
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kept
air
fresh to some extent. On the other side, others people think that
air
pollution
could be reduced by using the others effective methods.
For Instance
, people use
air
conditioner which
also
effect to the
air
.
As a result
, there can be seen unbalance in
outskirts
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the outskirts
like
reduce
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to reduce
reducing
the rain. So, these constructions should be so far away from human
habitant
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
. I believe that, only one
day
banned the usage of cars not solution for reducing the
air
pollution
. To sum up,
although
excessive usage of cars
are
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is
responsible for
air
pollution
, but we
can not
can not
cannot
ignore the other factors which pollute to the
air
like industries, factories. So government should make rules and regulations to control the threats which effect to human life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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