Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
air
pollution
has become a major issue all around the world. Some people think that the main reason of air
pollution
is most usage
of cars. So one Suggestion
more usage
day
should be international car free
Suggestion
an international car free day, which
an international car free day which
the international car free day which
day
which is most effective method
to reduce Suggestion
the most effective method
air
pollution but
others believe that there are more others ways to reduce it. Accept comma addition
pollution, but
This
essay looks into both views with personal opinion.
To begin
, some mortals think that an international car-free day
is an effective method to reduce air
pollution
because nowadays more than half percentage of public
are using the private vehicles which Suggestion
the public
emmit
the expel (gases or odors)
emit
fatel
gases in the bringing death
fatal
air
. These gases are very dangerous for human health. For example
, in Delhi city where roads are very congested due to driving the cars effect to the environment. For this
, in that city, the temperature is always high and there is no fresh or clean air
to breath. If one day
will be free from cars, there could be keep
Suggestion
kept
air
fresh to some extent.
On the other side, others people think that air
pollution
could be reduced by using the others effective methods. For Instance
, people use air
conditioner which also
effect to the air
. As a result
, there can be seen unbalance in outskirts
like Suggestion
the outskirts
reduce
the rain. So, these constructions should be so far away from human Suggestion
to reduce
reducing
habitant
. I believe that, only one the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
day
banned the usage of cars not solution for reducing the air
pollution
.
To sum up, although
excessive usage of cars are
responsible for Suggestion
is
air
pollution
, but we can not
ignore the other factors which pollute to the can not
cannot
air
like industries, factories. So government should make rules and regulations to control the threats which effect to human life.Submitted by jagbirsingh25 on
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