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In some countries, people follow the latest fashion and hairstyles. In your opinion, what is influencing this? Is this a good or bad thing?

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Nowadays, we are living in the era when human updated themselves with the recent fashion and hairstyle trend. In my opinion, social media and some public figures, especially celebrities, have a role to realize
this
 activity become a custom.
Therefore
, I admitted that follow the trend is a bad thing and I will discuss how it can change person's habit and
also
 can make new problems,
that is
 a financial struggle.
Firstly
, some people are overly influenced by some public figures.
Additionally
, most of them may become prone to personality disorders and they start imitating the notable persons with some of family members, and they become victims of a personality crisis.
For instance
, I have a female friend who feels family violence because she usually compare their husband with one of the Korean actors, especially about body shape and handsomeness.
Furthermore
, she wanted his husband to follow the latest trend world wide.
Hence
, it transforms to a major problem because his husband do not approve at all.
Furthermore
, using the recent fashions and hairstyles means that people must invest some money to update their wardrobe.
Although
 there may some fake mode, most of the apparel is not cheap to acquire.
This
 can happen because genre always shifting from time to time and be a regular shopper will definitely drain a lot of money.
For example
, I have a student who always purchase their clothes every year because most of their clothes are outdated. In brief, most of her money runs out to purchase some mode annually Overall, the practice of following the latest fashion under the influence of celebrities should be discouraged as it leads to personality problems as well as financial stress.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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