some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams such as football. other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming or running. discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is considered by many people that participating in sports which are played in teams

such

as football is more advantageous for players than who play by themselves. Other people prefer to take part in individual sports like swimming or running. While I understand that playing individual sports makes

substantial contribution

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a substantial contribution

in boosting up the independence, in my perspective,

team

sports are a smarter choice because not only do they advance

paticipants’

discipline

but

also

create more motivation.

To begin

with, individual sports are really helpful to make players more independent because they have no one to rely on. Their success entirely depends on their own efforts, just the athletes himself

carrys

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carry

carries

are carrying

him though the competition.

For instance

, my little brother

has played

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played

tennis for 2 years, and he makes everyone

surpised

taken unawares or suddenly and feeling wonder or astonishment

surprised

by showing his independence from

such

an

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a

young age of seven. He loves tennis so much that he goes to the tennis court himself and he always try his best to be stronger day by day. My parents believe that he becomes more and more self-reliant thanks to playing tennis.

However

, it is undeniable that playing sports in

team

improve the

discipline

and create more training motivation for players.

Although

people tend to relax and be easy on themselves when practicing on their own, as a

team

member, he/she is usually more responsible to not affect the other teammates. Take myself as an example, I am taking part in both basketball and running. I always attend basketball practice on

time regardless

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time, regardless

of bad weather, but I easily reschedule my running session when it rains. My story clearly illustrates that

team

sports are better than individual one in term of their incentive and

discipline

to players. In conclusion, there is no doubt that both individual and

team

sports are good for

paticipants but

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participants, but

participants but

I prefer

team

sports than individual sports because of the outstanding benefits they provide

such

as

discipline

and motivation.