The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

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the recent decades, air

pollution

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has become a significant widespread environmental issue. It is argued that the best way to tackle

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issue is to raise the price of petrol. While I agree, that provided solution could be helpful for

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the environment

, it is conspicuous that it will make

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the lives

of civilians more difficult and there some other solutions that could be more useful. It is lucid that by increasing the cost of gasoline and vehicles, air

pollution

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will be reduced. Due to

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, fewer cars and bikes will be riding on the streets and

pollution

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will be especially diminished in urban areas with a huge number of inhabitants.

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, to solve the environmental problems, Singapore authorities

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have added

huge taxes on buying new vehicles.

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has deterred locals from buying them.

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, the government is able to control

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, hiking the price of petrol and cars, will make it harder for many of the residents to move around

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the city

a city

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. A large segment of the population will no longer be able to enjoy

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a comfortable ride

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type of solution, will probably create a disapproval among people. There are a myriad of other ways for

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the authorities

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problem without generating negative attitude.

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, one of the solutions to tackle with environmental problems is to move away from fossil fuels, replacing them with alternative energies

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as solar, wind and geothermal. Producing clean energy is crucial. But equally important is to reduce our consumption of energy by adopting responsible habits and using more efficient devices.

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, government could encourage civilians to switch to using electric vehicles. In conclusion, environmental issues can be controlled by raising the prices of vehicles and gasoline;

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, other measures like switching to alternative sources of energy could be more beneficial in combating

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issue.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

309 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

disproportionately affect
renewable sources
solar energy
equity in environmental policies
exacerbating social inequalities
incentivizing
subsidies
strict regulations
industrial emissions
sustainable local production
carbon footprints
punitive measures
sustainability efforts
robust and lasting changes

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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