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the diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

the diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The diagram shows the five main systems which are used in writing throughout the world. The first
system
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 is Logographic, in which one
character
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 represents one word. Take Chinese
for example
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. Interestingly, because each
character
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 represents a word meaning rather than a sound, it is possible for 2 languages that are different in spoken form to share the same writing
system
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. It is particularly true of
Chinese
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the Chinese
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 and Japanese. There are four writing systems in which a
character
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 represents a sound. The oldest one is Abjad, in which a
character
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 represents a consonant sound. Arabic uses
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 type of
system
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. Related to
this
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 is the Bjuda
system
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, in which a
character
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 represents a consonant plus a vowel.
The
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An
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 example of
this
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 type is Indian Devanagari. The
third
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system
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 is Alphabetic, in which
a
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apply
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vowel and
a
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apply
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consonant sounds are represented by different characters. English,
for example
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, uses
this
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system
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.
Finally
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, the Syllabic is used in languages
such
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 as Japanese Kana, in which a
character
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 represents a syllable. T sum up, the diagram illustrates that there is a wide variation in writing systems around the world.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "for example".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words system, character with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 7 times.
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