You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Thank your friend for the holiday’ • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction how to send it back to you

Dear Michelle, I am writing to thank you for the incredible time we spent together on holiday in Paris. I have landed safely in India. We enjoyed

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it like

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anything as it was a

long awaited

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long-awaited

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holiday that was needed at

this

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time as I was so much stressed with my work schedule so it was

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energy booster for me. Unfortunately, I forgot my

wallet

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at your house that contain all my credit

cards

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and other important Id

cards

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. Let me explain

you

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to you

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more in brief. My

wallet

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is brown in

color

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colour

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and has

flip

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a flip

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button. As far as I remember I have left it on the rack that was beside the table lamp in your dining area. It contains my credit

cards

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my debit

cards

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and

also

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some

cash

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. Though I didn’t remember the

cash

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that is

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there in the

wallet

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. Could you please send it back to my office address as I spend more time there

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You can use the

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day courier service and can utilize the

cash

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that is

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available in the

wallet

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. You can keep

rest

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the rest

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of the

cash

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with you. Please let me know once you courier it. Your Friend Urvashi

Apr 16, 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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