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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Thank your friend for the holiday’ • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction how to send it back to you

#week #friend #holiday #home #wallet #holiday’ #house #instruction
Dear Michelle, I am writing to thank you for the incredible time we spent together on holiday in Paris. I have landed safely in India. We enjoyed
like
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 anything as it was a
long awaited
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 holiday that was needed at
this
 time as I was so much stressed with my work schedule so it was
a
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 energy booster for me. Unfortunately, I forgot my
wallet
 at your house that contain all my credit
cards
 and other important Id
cards
. Let me explain
you
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 more in brief. My
wallet
 is brown in
color
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 and has
flip
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 button. As far as I remember I have left it on the rack that was beside the table lamp in your dining area. It contains my credit
cards
 my debit
cards
 and
also
 some
cash
. Though I didn’t remember the
cash
that is
 there in the
wallet
. Could you please send it back to my office address as I spend more time there
.
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 You can use the
next
 day courier service and can utilize the
cash
that is
 available in the
wallet
. You can keep
rest
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 of the
cash
 with you. Please let me know once you courier it. Your Friend Urvashi

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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